Series on the Edge of Forever Star Trek Discovery first season review, note spoilers
"It would be logical for you to take into account my success rate during our seven years together, and execute my plan without further challenge before we're dragged into war!" "We have to!"
The solemn warnings of Michael Burnham in Star Trek Discovery's first episode, just prior to her physically assaulting her commanding officer unconscious. Advocating an unprovoked first-strike attack upon another ship, the entire season's 15 episode story arc, a protracted Klingon-Federation war, pivot around the effective delivery of these critical few lines. Her words are conveyed with all the earnestness and composure of a whining child complaining to her mother why she can't invite friends over for a pajama party.
Mutineer Burnham is instrumental in a devastating military conflict resulting in the Federation losing 75% of its fleet. The bold, treasonous act does nothing to establish her as a respected military leader destined for command. Neither, as the only human to attend the Vulcan Science Academy, a highly educated academic. But would seem better suited for the position of Star Bucks barista, only one who hasn't yet finished training. Any sciolist this arrogant, insubordinate or incompetent could not possibly be entrusted with the burdens or responsibilities of their own spaceship, they barely might be expected to get a coffee order right. Michael Burnham's actions in the role of Number One are wholly incredulous.
The majority of Starfleet's ships lay destroyed, hundreds of thousands of lives pointlessly extinguished resulting from Burnham's treasonous acts. However, concluding the season-long story arc Burnham experiences an epiphany, 'oopsie-daisy I was wrong' she opines reflecting back on the bloodbath. Given a mulligan and all is forgiven, her record is expunged and she is fully reinstated back into Starfleet.
After soul-searching and a heartfelt apology, among the carnage of destroyed vessels and myriad lives lost, Trek fans can now welcome the war criminal back into the federation fold. The bizarre narrative reads like a line from Monty Python's Jolly Good Felon sketch (S03E01), 'Yes it was a terrible thing to do, kill all those nice people and destroy so many of your wonderful spaceships. I'm very, very sorry and promise to never, ever let it happen again'. 'Three cheers for the accused! Here's your com-badge!' The writing here is laughable. Its premise, insulting. Martin-Green's selection as leading role, dumbfounding.
Martin-Green may be a competent perfomer. Unfortunately her limited acting range makes her the wrong choice for such a challenging role. Considering Burnham is presented as a champion of a gender or race empowering movement, and an entire season constructed around her ability to deliver a convincing performance, such inadequacies do a disservice to an important cause, herself and the viewer.
Emphasizing fantasy over reality, STD is riddled with ridiculous blunders and scientific errors. These aren't simply flagrant violations of Star Trek canon, they are D minus scientific gaffes at the grade school level. Ironically titled "Discovery", a spaceship which can literally go anywhere, has no exploratory mission. Absent any moral, philosophical or societal conundrums Trek often encountered in the voyage into the unknown, STD defaults to borrowing ideas from indie video gamers. And Discovery's outer saucer section spinning like a top, or when using the spore drive flipping like a coin, is just stupid.
"Star Trek is really about a quest for knowledge and to expand the human mind and growing and evolving by interacting with other intelligent life forms."
-Eugene Roddenberry son of Gene Roddenberry and Majel Barrett
The first season dramatically departs continuity of any previous Star Trek. Dark, gritty, explicit, STD attempts to emulate Westworld or Game of Thrones with spaceships and ray guns. Gone are the moments of levity, camaraderie or an amicable crew laboring in harmony to achieve some common goal. Its focus instead is on one person, Burnham, around whom an entire season of hollow character development and thin, dreary storyline unfolds. STD endeavors to offer high drama and gripping realism contrasted by moments of stark, realistic violence. Falling short, the end result is a parade of tiresome camera tricks and dimly-lit monotony punctuated by gratuitous cruelty tossed in for an 'edgy' atmosphere.
In addition to an entire season emphasizing the brutalities of war there are examples of profanity, nudity, rape, torture, murder and cannibalism. A Starfleet admiral who threatens planetary mass-genocide, an ethically challenged Federation which rewards its captains for murdering their entire crew, and employing slave labor working prisoners to their death. For some reason it becomes necessary to reveal Klingons are accoutred by dual phalluses. Hints of season two, implied incest and a severed child's head, along with a mattoid Spock deteriorating into a murderous psychotic, the product of a crippling "religious" experience.
What also seems unfortunate is that STD takes the opportunity to accentuate its notion of identity politics. Superficial characters reduced to the tokenism of their gender, ethnicity or sexual preference. The genuine Trek fan couldn't care less if a character were male, female, white, black, gay, transgender, androgynous, or even non-human. Fans want a Star Trek which remains faithful to its core principles, ideals which contributed it to becoming one of most treasured TV and movie dynasties in entertainment history. Diversity and egalitarianism aren't highlighted because it's nothing out of the ordinary. Gender, ethnicity or what someone may do with their pants off needn't become center stage of any Star Trek show. Any thinking trek fan ought to be insulted by such simplistic symbolism.
"I am the biggest trekkie on the planet."
"As a matter of fact this is the only show Coretta and I will allow our little children to watch, "
-Martin Luther King Jr.
Similarly, as in the conditions of poverty, disease or greed, canonical Star Trek had long ago relegated to the waste bin of human failures the weaknesses of bigotry and discrimination. It should go without saying, the traditional Star Trek fan is the last person anyone need lecture to about tolerance or inclusiveness.
Star Trek is more than just a TV show. It is an icon, an endearing phenomenon for tens of millions. A fictional universe, but one in which Star Trek philosophy, nomenclature or even recognizable hand gestures have found their way into everyday society. A world envisioned which is no longer blighted by hunger, poverty, intolerance or greed. A future which has even done away with trivial concerns of money. Compelled ever-forward by its optimistic outlook, man's bold venture into the unknown is also emblematic of a journey inward. Exploring the unknown challenges humanity to an appreciation of his abilities and limitations. Meeting sentient species or exploring new worlds advances man outside his existing paradigm. Star Trek is just as much an internal self-examination of who we are as it is the journey into the "final frontier".
Woven deeply into society's fabric, frequently inspiring the career paths of its viewers, the ideology of Star Trek embodies the hopes and dreams of humanity's future. Of course this is a world where bad things can still happen, but this is also a future in which man's ingenuity, perseverance, courage and innate sense of decency routinely overcomes its obstacles.
"Star Trek speaks to some basic human needs that there is a tomorrow, that the human race is improving," Gene Roddenberry (The Great Bird of the Galaxy), Star Trek creator
Star Trek Discovery puts an end to this optimistic perspective, offering instead man-buns and Twilight vampire teen drama in space. A regrettably dark future inhabited by superficial, craven, unlikable characters engaged in activities no one cares about.
STD fails its core mission to make a credible Star Trek. A show which had come to represent the best of mankind now resides behind a paywall and charges toll for access. There's more to the Star Trek formula than emphasizing gays and minorities then tossing in a Gorn skeleton and a few tribbles. Star Trek means much more than this. However STD isn't merely a bad rendition of Star Trek, it isn't just bad science fiction, its bad story telling altogether. A situation not likely to be resolved by the Klingons "getting their hair back".
The greatest challenge for any new Star Trek Discovery series isn't simply forsaking canon, or unnecessary social commentary, but the show's abandonment of mankind's hope for tomorrow. "City on the Edge of Forever" is often regarded among the finest examples of storytelling in the Star Trek universe. The iconic story finds our intrepid Enterprise heroes trapped in an incompatible "alternate timeline". The lesson learned in this, Star Trek's preeminent episode, sometimes when you love something so much to save it requires great sacrifice.
Thanks to STD a nonsensical, fractured world is where trek fans now find themselves. With its ridiculous premise and multitude canon violations it's entirely possible Star Trek may now be broken beyond repair. To save the proposition of Star Trek's optimism for tomorrow, to safeguard a vestige of the hopeful future it once held, it may become necessary end the series altogether, to reclaim the memory of what Star Trek once was, and preserve what hope for tomorrow remains.
Spock: "Jim, in order to set things straight again, Star Trek Discovery must die."
Kirk: "Let's Get the Hell Out Of Here".