OK (Lengthy) fantasies parallel-reality portrayal, but reality-transition screen-realisation is narrow. While this series probably should not be judged or scored in terms of comparisons with series / plots with wider long-term character progression/development, such as in epic novels and sequential-generations series, it'd also be too easily given too a high score if you only took most of it at face-value, especially considering that it is aimed at a younger audience,
However, you can also say how important it is there, to not be slack or careless to-use tropes or stereotypes, if wanting to create truly new identities in an alien world, where human values become Star Trek like self-conceited/imitated and not TRULY-ALIEN, when complex & unrealistically-present in things like villages, or in terms of development, histories of repetitive destabilization, etc.
The identities in the nations/settings in this series, are mostly ones meant to be ones often recovering from cycles of immense disaster and warfare, or raiding aided by magic, and for a fantasy-setting that introduces quite early on, that there's basically only offensive, healing, and magic-circles (which seem to do nothing but trap people), it sets a bleak setting of a absurdly simple range of magic's impact/influence/presence, as-well-as then also, a OK, inevitably and perpetually violent world, where power brokers VIA magic, would inevitably rise, and puppet nations would have their strings pulled via various parallel org.s.
Yet we're introduced into something that's half harry-potter amazement-going-to-school, and 1/2 special-kid-goes-straight-to-the-top, of the also absurdly transformed main chr, who although understandably hesitant, somehow ditched his decade? Of hikkokimori like existence back in the real world.
To pause to praise it for a moment, i did give it a star for the starting with the end, going backwards at times real-world reveals, leading to his momentous decision to go and find the dream-of-death, that he either hadn't fully realized was what he was going to find in a moment of clairvoyance, or, chose-anyway.
It's difficult to approach suicide in such a manner, so i also gave it 1/2 a star as a bonus, amongst the 4 total,
but i also have to say, that choosing too-backwards a, reveal 'plan', when storyboarding / planning, can go-wrong,
whereas if a mixture of at-first forwards-time, can introduce a character BEFORE a climax (or dislocated-/disjointed- climax in this case), and then after enough intro, you can then start the 'some time later' decision making, and then work back from there - i.e. If it was from 0-100, the whole time frame... 0-40... then 99-100,.. then back to 41-98.
The way it was done, was a little unnecessarily disjointed multiple times in terms of the parallel plots, almost as though the writer didn't want to have to EDIT it so that more about him was revealed earlier, OR, added to the climax nearer to the end.
Personally, if you're going to try to create a good plot-twist, you should always leave much of it for the END, nothing beats the explanatory oooOOooo, so that was-why! Reactions that you get if you hadn't guessed it.
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That said, because it's a waking-dream one in the context of a suicidal, clairvoyant pursuit, and interestingly LEFT unexplained except by modernity's neglect, there is actually quite a strong, poignant and important message there in terms of trying to SHOW people who don't understand modern loneliness / tech-fragmented-societies' -suicides, & what kinds of things can make a person FEEL more empowered ;
the pityful chr here's choice, to pursue a sort of clairvoyant-loop or self-fullfilling-end, with an absurd amount of veiling, self-DISTRACTING, content, was also quite good in terms of real-life mental illness, where even-when a distraction / hobby / choice of how one spends one's time can be consciously chosen, that the individual can still be prone to making decisions that might end a perceived inevitability of suffering but ALSO be-naive ones, to be fairly critical, or critical-ENOUGH, of the suicidal who hasn't experienced enough of-life-AFTER change, to know any better about how they can change their circumstances.
So there's also a included-in-the-package pandora's box of parallel value sets and dichotomies there,
he's highly fantasy capable, but barely able to fantasize himself improving, or his parents potentially being willing to listen to a suggestion like moving to a different part of the country and starting-anew, etc ... or other ones, like his potential for fantasy in being more in control of his sexual appetites / means of approaching others in relation to it.
In some of those pandora's boxes of fantasy parallels, this series then falls quite disappointingly flat, relying on a lot of character stereotypes and stressor/adversities SET in a very narrow range of depths-of-character,..
... but ... again, because it's meant to be in his head,..
... that also has a mirroring or further-proving of his naiveté when-also the SOURCE, -of, those characters,..
... conveniently for the real-world writer ;)
... but all-too-easily single-source HEAPED-upon just the one stumbling through life character.
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It COULD, have blamed-more, been a bit more political / socially-responsive, in the introduction to HIS suffering,..
...instead, it focuses on mostly his inadequacies/incapacities, which considering that he's a virgin 30?40? YO hikokkimori type, is quite unfair.
Portraying the bullying he went through, withOUT portraying the uncaring external world in larger-SCOPE, risks it being portrayed as more of a individual-failure, rather than a by-product of modern sick human social-breakdown, isolationism, density, overpopulation, etc, by-products.
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Similarly, in his fantasy-world characters, although there is diversity, in what's being played out in his imagination,
although we some see dreamscape 'edges', there is much too much focus on confident, strong-personality characters, or highly-self-'expressive' (modern fashion/personality sense), when medieval, especially when it comes to poor-education settings, people are actually much more hesitant, unsure, CONFERRING, social-decision-makers-huddling, etc. We were also 'privileged' to experience the perhaps most-absurd demon-lord character, who seems to be little other than some B&D squirt-fantasy.
Yes, again,
it is meant to be HIS, fantasy,
but that's the extent of power, that he's supposed to be willing to explore,.. IN ... his fantasy?
Since when do suicidals, not have nightmarishly cruel, depths that one cannot escape from?
I don't know about you, but when i dream of a demon or something, it is not as pathetically lightweight/neo-modern as she was. -1/2 star just for her!
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There were also too many character simplifications of the in-fantasy characters along-the-way, to make much of it seem worth watching to any great level of attention, even if you cared for some of the circumstances they were meant to be in.
If you accepted the premise, that he actually HAD been reincarnated into another world, within reasonable degrees of acceptance (in a fantasy), then although it is hinted by the end what's actually happening, such as in the opening his curtains getting daylight having the fantasyscape washed-away by outside real-world light, to be pulled along for as long as the series went for, for something that would end up although a good demonstration of some of what happens to (some)suicidals, felt like a distance unnecessarily traveled.
Other series that have tried portraying a world-with-a-world, or the degree of elaboration within just-one-mind, have done so before the back-in-reality reveal, a LOT more efficiently.
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So while the in-fantasy-setting ride is OK, if you like fantasy stories with familiar dynamics, then fine,.. it's got lots of that.
But as a dreamscape transitional,
why have literally 99% of the series SET IN the fantasy?
That's too much. 80-95maybe, and 95's pushing the limit.
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consequentially, i couldn't give either reality enough from the positives of-the-other, to allow both to contribute to a high score, and then the base exposure risks, of things like character-stereotyping, and focus on his personal inadequacies, without much social-critique / taking a stance,
felt like a betrayal of all the time i spent watching it.
Not everyone who watches fantasy, or makes fantasy, is as helpless as the poor sap in this, to then be nailed as-he-is, in a neo corporate-competitive-pressure/democracy-failing world ;
to many of us,
'the' fantasy setting, is non singular, fantasy-settingS '
are non- mental-health contextual *rolling eyes*,
are non- hikokkimorio-suicidal contextual *facepalm*, and
are non- you-WILL-develop-inadequacies paranoid,
( fantasy is a thing that can be a MIRROR-TOOL particularly, or experimental play-ground, even-if often time-consuming.
What will you see, Bilbo Yamada? )
That incomplete / arrogant POV on fantasy, added an additional -1 star on top of the other ones that took it down, when it could've had longer periods of transitional time-spending - more time SPENT, in both worlds.
The Inuyasha classic series comes to mind. Often repetitive stressor/conflict resolutions on-stage ... in the action between the characters, but,.. there is a decent amount of on-screen time spent back in the modern world - yes, it is different since both worlds are meant to be real / only time-dislocated within the setting, but i'm talking about FANTASY-transition, not time.
Take say, a disturbing christian dogma / dreams/visions nightmare setting, a thriller or horror, where a disturbed 'leader' , so completely ruins the imaginations of his 'flock' ... and one is so out of it a lot of the time, that THEIR transitions, interpose themselves INTO reality, when set to thinking, that BRINGING that non-reality,.. INTO reality,.. is somehow a moral thing to do. Ugh.
Each JUMP-between , is what i mean - too few, and too non-linear.