Ok, but...... I'm trying to figure out what the writers were trying to accomplish here. Taken by itself the story wasn't too bad but it just didn't fit the whole RWBY canon. First the story was a blatant rip off of "Alice In Wonderland." Up till now the writers didn't need to rip off the work of classic writers, they had enough original ideas. Second, the openly gay relationship between Blake and Yang was, for me (a dedicated heterosexual) a big turn off. I'm tolerant of people's sexuality, but I don't appreciate having it slapped across the screen in such a way. That said, this story did have it's good, even great moments. People always talk about the action but, for me, I also like good story telling. If this is taken as a single, stand alone piece, it's not bad, it just doesn't fit the rest of RWBY.