Helping Out My Brother

After an effective beginning, in which beautiful stepsister Kylie Rocket helps build the confidence of her nerdy brother RIcky Spanish by taking him away from on-line gaming for a bit, to teach him how to please a woman, this APOVStory 2-parter nullifies its good will with a mean-spirited gonzo conclusion.

Maddy Burton's screenplay is convincing when it shows clever Kylie helping her brother -she's hard to resist. Unfortunately, the second segment is never believable.

It has Chad Alva waking up Kylie with loud pounding on her door -he's visiting to collect money owed him by her brother Ricky. Asserting he's a co-worker, he basically acts like he owns the place after Kylie, who's never met him, invites him in to wait for Ricky to come home. Chad is a total creep, saying nasty things about Ricky, bragging about his sexual prowess, yet he's able to instantly get Kylie to have sex with him. Scene makes no sense and is strictly filler.