Very promising I am not an expert in reviewing movies but I liked the script, the visuals and the soundtrack. The introduction is well done, it takes you straight into the atmosphere and what the movie is about: violence, fear and tension. Words are tough, which contributes to this atmosphere. The slow down, change of music type and zoom on Olivia's face is nicely done as well. However, thought that the relation with Olivia goes too quickly and therefore loses some credibility. But that's probably a more fundamental issue in general with short movies: not much time for a well rounded story. In a nutshell, well done, especially for a first one and with very few means. Keep it up!
