Absolutely terrible writing The 3 stars I give this are for the gameplay and the beautiful world the game devs created, the writing/story actually deserves negative stars it was so brutally bad.
I'll preface this by noting that I played these games back to back since I missed the initial release of Part I (I had kids and they consumed my life for awhile!). So unlike most people, I played Part I and then immediately started Part II, I was so oumped after the first one to see the sequel! But imagine if you will after the making of Star Wars - A New Hope they made a sequel where Han Solo is killed immediately and Luke's character changes 180 degrees and becomes a soulless killing machine without a shred of his former integrity. Then surround them with a bunch of characters you don't care about in the slightest whether they live or die and add a bunch of random brutality (to humans, not to monsters) and a story that makes no sense, is disjointed and lacks any shred of pacing and you've got this game. Its like the first one was written by a famous screenwirter and the second one by an film school drop out, its really, really bad. They introduce LGBTQ characters into this game as well, but they don't do it in a natural, organic way that makes sense, they shoehorn them in awkwardly and rather than adding to the story and progressing it, they become a plot device they have to write around to make the game, it's clunky and awkward. It's like the writers felt like that addition was more important to the game than the storytelling. The game has lengthy, unskippable cut scenes you are forced to play through that are boring af and ruin the pacing. Part I of the game nothing felt forced and it never dragged or got bogged down, it just flowed beautifully. Part II there is none of this, its just arbitrary parts shoved together with little to no forethought. I was so disappointed.